1The makerasks one question.2A helperanswers it.3The Recordis the maker’s note of what changed.4Both profilesshow it once the helper confirms.
RecordA gameA gameA storyA songA comic
In response to
“Where does it stop being fun?”“Where does it stop being fun?”“Where did you start skimming?”“At what point would you skip this?”“What looks off in these pages?”
e.g.Slower first waves, so players staySlower first waves, so players stayChapter one opens on the stormThe chorus arrives a bar soonerThe hands finally look like hands
The maker recorded this:
They played it twice and showed me where the fun stopped. I slowed the first three waves.They played it twice and showed me where the fun stopped. I slowed the first three waves.They admitted skimming until the storm hit. I cut the first four pages, so it starts there.They nearly skipped before the chorus, and said so. I cut the intro in half.They said the hands looked stiff in every panel. I redrew them all from life.
Confirmed by a helperPermanent and uneditable.Recorded